Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Ego Diminishing

I'd been talking to a couple of friends about whether or not one could make a completely rational, non-biased decision without - in part at least suppressing his id.

This was a concept of dits which I helped write a year back. I pretty much wrote it with the thought of it being put into film - which I still hope gets done. C'mon ditter!!

On a side note I got ditter's blog added to the links as well since its active again.


Its the first of 2 parts.

PART 1

Getting out of bed, the music filled his head. Clean chords kept in reign with their sweet voices

The morning air had the light bounce of spring in it. This, he thought was the way a day was meant to be. The dull apartment felt fresh and new. His minds eye ignored the grime that had settled around him through twenty-seven years of sheep living.
He walked to the salon. As he walked inside, he noticed the hairdressers eyes. She was beautiful.
He now looked decent.

Back home, he felt the clean blue of the water as he showered and then shaved. Aah, the music.
Locking the door, he knew this day was a new beginning. His overused t-shirt and old jeans now looked out of place. The music soared.

The store attendant raised an eyebrow. Screw him!
He bought a standard blazer with matching pants.The shoes he bought had the dull gleam of rich leather. He left his old skins in the changing room. Let the bastard deal with them, he thought. Damn! the guitarist was good.

Walking into the beautiful victorian building he noticed that the doorman touched his cap to him, the bloody clothes made a difference after all.

He took the elevator to top floor,
with confidence inborn he opened the old iron door.

The music peaked.
As the Sun shone bright above,
the kundalini rose.
The edge is a beginning,
He knew.

He Jumped.



and the baby was born.

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